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Should students work while going to school?

Do you know that working while attending school is a great learning experience for students of any age? In today’s society many people are working towards getting an education, especially us young adults but it is also important to learn how to multi task and learn how to provide for yourself. You can learn many beneficial things when you work and go to school. Although some might find it difficult and disagree I believe students should work while going to school, here’s why.