Edit the essay which I attached to at least 1600 words homework help

Edit the essay which I attached to at least 1600 words homework help

1. Edit the essay which I attached to at least 1600 words.

2. Find at least 1new source about the subject, and use it in this essay.

3. Need copy of source pages which you used in this essay (screenshot, pictures, or scan document), highlight the sentences which you use (The picture I attached is a example of copy pages).

3. Correct all grammar and spell mistakes.